The Short Story

Go on, read it. I dare you.
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The link goes to a short story that I did as my project for a creative writing class I took this last semester, and its 25 pages represent countless hours of brainstorming, writing, and rewriting. This last draft went from 3rd to 1st person and a extreme refinement of the prose and character of the writing within it, and I’m sort of proud that I was able to pull that off so well. Anyway, I go into more detail on the Author’s Comments for the story’s DA entry and I won’t blather on here. Feel free to post comments, criticisms, and friendly snarky remarks.

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